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jasmine <3's avatar

“SO WHY DIDNT I PREDICT THE PREDICTABILITY THAT IS YOU”?????? THE CHILLS I GOT FROM THIS i fear ive fallen and i cant get up

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Bella's avatar

IVE BEEN RUINED FOR ANY OTHER WRITING

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jasmine <3's avatar

FOR REAL THERES JUST SOMETHING ABOUT LAUREN’S WRITING THAT HITS SO HARD

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Farrah💗💗's avatar

YES LAUREN WE LOVE YOU SO MUCH

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Kalista's avatar

LOVE THIS 🫶

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Avagh's avatar

As an aspiring author (and huge powerless fan), your words mean so much to me. Thank you so much- your work never fails to inspire!!

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Juliana Allen's avatar

“How is it that the future is a mystery when I continue to relive the past?” chills.

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Bella's avatar

I literally teared up

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Bella's avatar

“Even the sky cries, predictable in the way it mourns the sun.”

Lauren, this is beautiful. I think there’s always a writer’s plague in only seeing the flaws of your work. I am the same way with my artwork that I paint. It’s because everyone else only sees the final product, whereas you saw the work, the drafts, the rewrites, etc. Someone on the internet called them “artist scars.” We can’t look past them, despite our best attempts to cover them up.

I would love to have a book that’s inspired on your own love story. I think it’s a beautiful, delicate thing and it’s so honorable to feel so loved in life.

I lost my sun nearly a year ago now. I am coping, but I am predictable in the way I cry, as I mourn my sun.

Your poetry speaks to my grief. Your words hold me while no one else does. Most of all, they give me a reason to stay tethered to this world instead of taking myself out, because they remind me how much there is still left to live for. ❤️‍🩹

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𝓛𝓪𝔂𝓪𝓷's avatar

Lauren, I truly am in awe by every word you said, it’s beautifully described.. and it’s All so true! Thank you for sharing this with us. For giving us a glimpse of your work over and over again, I’m forever grateful!💐💐

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Isabels_library's avatar

Its truly a beautyfull poem that felt almost heartwarming. I love every word you write

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jaxyn's avatar

LAUREN IN HER POSTING ERA ✨✨✨

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Sarita's avatar

This poem is beautiful! Really showcases the unpredictability of loving someone. Loved reading this and can’t wait for the next one xx

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Mariah Gillies's avatar

Lauren thank you for blessing us with your writing🤍 You have written my favourite books in the world, please never stop!🥹

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Maddyy's avatar

LAUREN THIS IS A MASTERPIECE!!!

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Sarah's avatar

I have never seen something so beautiful THIS IS AMAZING.

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Tj Wildman's avatar

Girl you are amazing pls keep writing!

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Chela's avatar

The reason I love your books is the poeticness of Kai. The perfectly written words that give me chills and I loved every second of reading them. :))

Also I see no flaw in this poem. :)

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Lilas's avatar

My heart is telling me that this is for her fiancé😭

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